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My Anonymous-Chan
by: Shock777
Naruto was laying on his bed. Nothing to do at all that day. It was terribly boring. There

hadn’t been a mission in a long time and he was getting aggravated. “Why Won’t Tsunade-Baachan

give me a decent mission?!” Naruto screamed at himself. “ I bet she gives all the missions to any

other person except me!! This BLOWS!!” Naruto flopped over on his back and looked up at the

ceiling. He sighed. Naruto knew this wasn’t getting him anywhere. He decided to go out to Ichiraku

It was around 5 o’clock that evening. Walking down the streets, he set eyes on someone he

knew, yet didn’t know at all. It was Sakura-chan. His heart skipped a beat as he stood there,

gaping at her beauty. She was walking into a shop, and then finally noticed him. Naruto gulped,

and waved at her. She frowned, and turned her head sharply. Naruto slumped down, feeling totally

depressed. She was still mad at him for yesterday. Naruto didn’t understand it. Why was she still

mad at him for using the “Ninja Centerfold?” He was confused and heartbroken at the same time. He

entered Ichiraku and ordered a bowl of miso with pork. While he was waiting for his meal to

arrive, his mind was wandering. “Sakura-chan..” He thought. “Why do you hate me? I’d do anything

for you...You should know that by now!!” Naruto moaned aloud. Ayame handed him his bowl.
“A..are you okay, Naruto?” she asked sweetly.
“Hunh?” Naruto looked up. “Oh, yeah..I’m fine. Just kinda thinking about something.” Ayame

seemed to not believe him.
“Then why are you crying?” Ayame asked as she wiped a tear away from his cheek. Naruto

blushed slightly as he didn’t even realize he was crying. Naruto quickly wiped away his tears and

averted his eyes. “I-It’s nothing, really...I’ll be fine.” Naruto answered with a lie. Ayame

sighed, and let him be. Naruto looked down at his chopsticks. He knew he was hiding it: deep down

he was really broken up. He was starting to believe he was hated by every girl. Naruto was sure

Sakura-Chan was the one for least...that’s what he wanted to believe...

After the ramen, he walked down to the training field. Just to clear his head, he sat down

on a hill and stared up at the full moon. Then, he felt a tap on his shoulder. He looked up to see

Hinata looking down at him and smiling. “Oh! Hi Hinata.” Naruto said to her. She smiled more, and

kneeled down to him.
“Good Evening, N-Naruto-kun...” She answered quietly. “What are you doing out here this

“I just came out here to look at the moon, you know?” He looked down. “It kinda calms me

down after a long day.” Hinata Sat down next to him.
“ you and I are the s-same...” Naruto blinked at her. “We both like to look at

the moon.”
They were both quiet for a minute or so as they watched the dark horizon. Hinata fidgeted

with her fingers, as if preparing herself to tell him something. “Naruto-kun?”
“Yeah?” he asked.
“I-I’ve been training a lot lately...Kurenai-sensei told me that it was important to

improve on all my skills...n-not just gentle fist, but other attributes as well.”
“Like what?”
“ I’ve been training hard to..uhm...get better at my Ninjutsu and Genjutsu.”
“Wow. That’s great, Hinata!” Naruto smiled. He was glad Someone was talking to him at

least. Hinata blushed, and scooted closer. Just a little.
“I’m..trying my best to improve, Naruto-kun...I really am!”
“I’m glad you’re enthusiastic about it, Hinata! You know, if you really want to get

strong, you can train with me sometimes!!” Naruto giggled, expecting her to say something like:

“hahaha...yeah right!” or “Good one..That was a good one!!” But he was swept backwards when she

“S-sounds like fun...I-I’d like that...” Naruto just blinked at her. Hinata quickly turned

red, and averted her eyes. “It’s getting l-late...Father will be mad if I don’t get home” Naruto stood up as Hinata did. “I’ll see you some other time!” she said. Hinata

poofed off in a puff of smoke. For some reason, Naruto had forgotten about his past depression. He

felt a little lighter, and walked home much happier than he previously was 40 minutes ago.
this is chapter one of my very long fanfic...^^; It would be nice if someone took the time to read this and give me some feedback..i think this is my best fanfic ever. Hope you like! and for those of you who read it-please let me know how you think! :heart:
you may have to click DOWNLOAD to read it! ^^;

naruto and other characters(c)Masashi Kishimoto
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JP700 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Only one question, and I kept it for a long time, what is the Ninja Centerfold?
shock777 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the sexy no jutsu
PonchoFirewalker01 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2015
When one thinks about it, ANY girl would be upset of him using that jutsu XD
JP700 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Kisses from Jongin:iconsays3plz:Thanks, again Great Fiction!]:iconnarutothumbsupplz::iconmoehinata-plz::iconkakathumbsupplz:
mininalover Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Student Writer
i think it's a great fanfic too
Ramrikai Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
How old are they in this? I'm guessing pre-skip, so around 12. As has been said, the formatting is a little off. Double spaced inside paragraphs, but only single spaced between them; opposite of what it should be.
shock777 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
theyre not pre skip because sai is in it lmfao 
Ramrikai Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. Well he wasn't in the first chapter. I figured it out later anyway.
Dragon-hime Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
I like this start! :D (Big Grin) 
WhiteLionXIII Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
I like it so far Hinata always knows how to cheer Naruto up. Off to read chapter 2
Geropold Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
even though im on here for like almost a year now, i cant remember having read any other fanfic that got THIS stuck in my head...(this fanfic seriously should bet he next naruto movie or something like that :D)
shock777 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD daw gero :) im glad it was good XD;
Geropold Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
lol :D im still looking for a fic that is able to compete with this one :D
BlueSpartan2 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
have you tried mattwilson's NaruHina fanfic?
129 chapters 2510 pages currently
still ongoing though he is on a vacation currently
Geropold Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
yes...i've read it :D and i love it :D
to be honest, i've read it before i found this one...
Geropold Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012
HA! now i found it ! RE-READ!!! NAO!! :D
EmiNaruHinafan Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011
:D awwwwwwww:love:
firecatangel Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
rageofkyubii Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2009
Good opening chapter. Nothing really to critique other than the way the chapter is posted makes it a bit hard to read.
ribonsnlace Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009  Student General Artist
Awww! That was really cute! I kinda wish the formatting wasnt so screwed up, but it a good story. im excited to read more!
NarutoNineTaleFox Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009  Student Artist
Love it ^^
DEguardian Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2009
Advice No.1- Work on formatting.
inugirl24 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
good story!
Molliemon Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2009
A nice start, although the way the sentences are broken up makes it kind of hard to follow.

Meh, on to the next chapter!
katara121 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thats awesome :D :D :hug: btw i'm sorry i can't coment on the next but i am gonna fav them :D
fan-fictionfantasy Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2009   Writer
I would have to agree.The best you've made.Certainly better than me.^^;
shock777 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aww, don't say that! you're really good at making stories! :D
i wish this story of mine was an actual episode. :D I tryed to write it so that you can see it as an episode in your head! :D
fan-fictionfantasy Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2009   Writer read them!?Which one?
And yeah I could imagine them like that.
thadarova Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:love: dis is even better than MY fanfic!!! :XD:
shock777 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
really? :XD: it doesn't get good til like the 4th chapter..^^;
thadarova Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i read em all im gonna go comment on each one after i finish replying =D
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